- you can _just_ open it in
- It _renders_ a heading saying “Hello, world!” on the page. - you are using the same word as the thing you are describing.
- “A Note on JavaScript” the title doe snot suggest that you need to read it because you are learning about react ,not JS. Something like “React & JavaScript” or something like “Knowledge Level Assumptions”
- “we recommend **refreshing** your JavaScript knowledge so you can follow along more easily.” — refreshing suggest that someone. Already knows JS, so if they don’t know JS they will feel dejected. Try “We highly recommend [going through a Javascript tutorial]() to check your knowledge level.”
- “We also use some of the ES6 syntax” - **We** that suggests its a us vs the user. Instead go for “**The documentation** will use some [ES6 Syntax](LINK TO WHAT IS ES6)”
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