From 308b6c9efe0f5e409ce266376d63e763f048df7a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: petehunt <floydophone@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 25 Oct 2013 11:40:54 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Changes based on feedback

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 index.md | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.md b/index.md
index 0f038afb5..64f16c1b2 100644
--- a/index.md
+++ b/index.md
@@ -16,15 +16,15 @@ id: home
     <div class="marketing-col">
       <h3>Virtual DOM</h3>
       <p>
-        React uses a virtual DOM representation for ultra-high performance. It can also
-        run outside of the browser on Node.js.
+        React uses a <i>virtual DOM</li> representation for ultra-high performance. It can also
+        render on the server using Node.js &mdash; no heavy browser  DOM required.
       </p>
     </div>
     <div class="marketing-col">
       <h3>Data flow</h3>
       <p>
-        React implements one-way data binding which is simpler, faster and easier to
-        scale than alternatives.
+        React implements one-way reactive data flow which reduces boilerplate and is
+        easier to reason about than traditional data binding.
       </p>
     </div>
   </div>